Re: I Can Think
how about, instead:[ I Think, ] my arms around herin a world full of knobs and doors---here is one of my favorite of minimalist pieces:by Mike Topp (as published in elimae)Disappointment...
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It's bold but minimal presentation adds a world of perspective to this write. The speaker is nonchalant- clinical even, regarding this relationship, situation, occurrence.i love it.
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Back in the day when I was a fundementalistmy minister once said to me;"The greatest writers are the writers that say the mostwith the fewest amount of words"I"ve always considered the advice golden....
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The imagery, I could readily relate to, almost as fast and frantically as the poem feels it should be. Although LoQI has a great comment, not sure I'd change a thing. Good stuff.Michael
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ryan interesting take on it. Intriguing poem by Topp!Thanks for your comments!
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I like the brevity (of course) but even more I like the fact that as brief as it is there is room for the reader to draw their own conclusions. It is obvious that there is an exit. But is this a...
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